October Girl

Robyn I punched the person holding me... a very attractive guy. "Ouch!" He winced. "We aren't not having anything!" I gasped. "Who are you?!" I gasped. "It's me... Alex... your ...

Sam I held Aurora in my arms. "Whoa..." I gasped. "What?" She askd worriedly. "Deja vu or something...." I shook my head, nevermind. Presant use to be dead Robyn (lol) ...

I wasn't exactly sure what point you were trying to get across but I liked the lyric/poem thingie alot. I felt like I could actually sing it, but with my ...

Robyn I turned redder then calmed down. "I can try something... but sure it'll work. So don't shoot the messanger 'k?" "Alright... anything." He prayed. "OK." I said. "Honey hold ...

Robyn "I'm here, if I had really really died the whole enitre future would have changed." I felt my Alex's arms around me. "Don't worry, she... me.... I am perfectly ...

Can I just say B E A U T I F U L???? lol great job I like it alot -Max

Robyn "Ok, ok. Calm down." "I can't calm down, you have to help me, you have to be there!" He said shaking. "I don't know, you have to find a ...

Lucas "I don't know!" I yelled back. "I don't know I didn't purposely do this, I'm just as surprised as you are." Robyn "What's going on?" I asked.

Lucas "I dunno, I got angry and I pushed you four months into the past, but hey at least Taylor and Aj are here." I said pointing to mom's round ...

Robyn "What are you talking about?" "But.... it's you... the figures." "Alex." I said sturnly. "What's wrong with you? Did you hit your head or something?"

I liked the first one but the rest were 4/10 sorry :cry:

Ace He looked down at his siter. "Your gonna be fine, promise." "Promises promises." Elena said looking up, she was so much more shorter than Ace. "You do look like ...

haha nice, I liked the title of the story because it drew me in, I like how you started off it was very strong and someone said earlier that it ...

Ace Ace had been looking, scanning the bar waiting for something to come up. "Len." He said pulling Elena closer. "What?" She asked her acent filling his ears. "Look." He ...

Robyn "Honey, calm down, everyones fine... and Yes they did get married." I said smiling. "You sure your ok?" "Where's Lucas?" He asked. "He's taking a nap." I said. "Then ...